After almost five years, I’ve decided to move my story from its own site on WordPress to an entry on Royal Road. The writing tools there are actually very helpful for authors presenting serialized stories like this.
The most recent chapter can be found at this link:
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/54450/delphic/chapter/914774/chapter-33-intangible
I hope to see your comments there.
Delphic 